Question

假定你是李华，你校与美国一所友好学校决定通过网络开展跨文化交流活动(Cross Cultural Communication Project)。请你用邮件与美方联系，谈谈自己的设想，征求对方意见。
交流内容要点如下：
1．自我介绍；
2．饮食文化差异；
3．中学教育；
4．语言学习体会。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hi Mark，
Hope all is well．
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                               
                                                                                               
Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

Hi Mark,
Hope all is well. I’d like to take this opportunity to share my plan with you on our Cross Cultural Communication Project.
To be practical, we can have four aspects in our communication. First, a brief self introduction is needed. Then, as students in both sides are interested in foreign students’ life, food culture sharing will surely be the most popular. In addition, each one is expected to describe the education that they are having in their own countries. Last but not least, exchange of skills for language study may be of great value to both sides. 
That’s all. I’m open to your suggestions and expecting your plan. Only with joined efforts can the project be a great success.
Yours，
Li Hua

解析试题分析：本文属于应用文中的书信类书面表达，审题后可知，主要介绍通过网络开展跨文化交流活动，文章的要点只是给出了提纲，不能仅仅翻译，要适当扩展，可以分三段来写。1．自我介绍； 2．饮食文化差异； 3．中学教育； 4．语言学习体会。表达要点的时候要运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。可以适当使用谚语，
【亮点说明】a brief self introduction is needed.这句话用了被动语态，比主动语态好， In addition, each one is expected to describe the education that they are having in their own countries.这句话用了非限制性定语从句， exchange of skills for language study may be of great value to both sides. 这句话用了be of+抽象名词的词组。Only with joined efforts can the project be a great success.这句话用了倒装句，
还有在把要点串联起来的时候要用到关联词：first，second，besides，last but not least等。
考点：考查提纲类短文写作