Question

16．Nowadays，the term"sense of happiness"has been repeatedly mentioned in various medias．During the National Day holidays，CCTV did a nation-wide survey by asking random passers-by the question"Are you happy now？What exactly is happiness in your eyes？"The survey aroused a heated discussion across the country and people from all walks of life expressed their opinions．
"I would say I'm pretty happy at present because my dear daughter has graduated from college and found herself a decent job．"said a woman in her fifties with a big smile on her face．
Though it seemed that most people said they were happy，different voices were still heard and should not be ignored．There was a migrant worker（农民工） whose answer to the question was widely spread online．When asked if he was happy，he said"My family name is Zeng"，showing his determination to refuse the interview as well as his annoyance to mention happiness．
The brand-new Chinese Nobel Prize winner Mo Yan answered"I don't know"in an interview when he was asked the same question：Are you happy？
[写作内容]
1．以约30个词概括上文的主要内容．
2．以约120个词就"幸福"的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：
（1）目前你是否感到幸福及其原因；
（2）请描述到现在为止让你觉得最幸福的一件事情；
（3）谈谈你对幸福的理解．
[写作要求]
1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事．也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照三段式模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 时态用一般现在时．人称用第一和第三人称． 重要短语：at present（现在），to the fullest（最充分地），fulfill one's dreams（实现某人的梦想），sth happen to sb（某人发生什么事），receive the scholarship（获得奖学金），go through （经历），financial difficulties（经济上的困难），make up one's mind（下定决心），win the scholarship（赢得奖学金），lighten financial burden（减轻经济负担），make efforts（努力），lie in（在于），as far as sb be concerned（就某人关注的而言），．
【高分句型一】
1．When asked by the CCTV whether they were happy，most people gave a positive answer while some didn't．
此处是时间状语从句中的省略，可以理解为"When they are asked by the CCTV whether they were happy"，主句为"most people gave a positive answer while some didn't．"．
【高分句型二】
1．So I made up my mind to win the scholarship，hoping to lighten my parents'financial burden．
此处是由现在分词短语作伴随状语，主句为"I made up my mind to win the scholarship"，主句的主语为"I"，与所给动词"hope"构成逻辑上的主动关系．
【高分句型三】
3．It was the happiest thing ever happening to me that I will treasure for the rest of my life．
此处是强调句型，如果去掉强调句型的骨架"It was/is …that"，原句句子成分齐全，句意通顺．

解答 When asked by the CCTV whether they were happy，most people gave a positive answer while some didn't．【高分句型一】The Nobel Prize winner Mo Yan said he didn't know whether he was happy or not．（概括）
        At present，I am pretty happy because I am doing what I like and I like what I am doing．As a senior three student，I study hard every day and live it to the fullest．It feels good to study hard with my determined classmates to fulfill our dreams．（是否感到幸福及其原因）
  When I recall the happy things which happened to me，the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped them all．It was a time when my family was going through the extreme financial difficulties．So I made up my mind to win the scholarship，hoping to lighten my parents'financial burden．【高分句型二】After making tons of painstaking efforts，I succeeded．At the ceremony，I could see my mom was the most poorly-dressed woman，yet with the brightest smile on her face．It was the happiest thing ever happening to me that I will treasure for the rest of my life．【高分句型三】（你觉得最幸福的一件事情）
         As far as I am concerned，happiness lies in the effort of making those we love smile．When we bring happiness to them，it gives happiness to ourselves．（个人观点：对幸福的理解）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．