Question

【题目】假设你叫李华，是一家英文杂志社的心理咨询师。某中学生小王给你写信，提到自己偏胖，想节食减肥，征求你的意见。请你给她回一封信，谈谈你对该问题的见解。内容要点如下：

1．健康的重要性；

2．学生的任务；

3．合理建议。

注意：

1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；

2．词数：100左右。

3．参考词汇：stateofmind心态

4．不需要写题目

DearXiaoWang,

Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyoumentionedthatyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Xiao Wang,

I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.

It is only natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful. However, in my opinion, health is more important than beauty. For a student, studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second. So do not let others’ opinions affect your normal life. However, if you do want to lose weight, it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing unhealthy eating habits. The most important thing is that you keep a healthy state of mind, as it will help with your studies, and will also hope you overcome difficulties I dieting.

I hope my advice will be helpful to you and I’m looking forward to your next letter.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：

1.通篇以一般将来时与现在时态为主。

2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。

3. 注意文章要以书信的形式进行叙述，言辞要诚恳，一定要通过简单的例子作为支撑。否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。

【范文亮点】

文章以“I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.”开头，直奔主题，开门见山，引出本文的主题。

文章采用了“However、as”等连接词，使行文更加流畅，“it is a good idea to 做某事是一个好主意” “In my opinion在我看来”“ The most important thing is that最重要的是” “Looking forward to 期望做某事”等高分词组。

I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting. which引导的非限制性定语从句。