Question

【题目】科学技术的发展给我们的日常生活带来了很大的变化。请你以“Science and technology is changing our life greatly”为话题，谈谈你家三代人购物生活的变化，并畅想未来的购物方式。

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Answer 1

【答案】With the development of science and technology，our way of life has been changing all the time．Many things that we thought would never happen before are now a reality．（高分句型一）For example，the way of shopping has changed in many ways．My grandmother told me she usually covered a long distance to a small shop in town to buy her goods．Later，supermarkets opened in our town，so my mother went shopping in a supermarket near my home because it was very convenient．（高分句型二）

In recent years，online shopping has become popular．Many young people like me prefer to buy what we like sitting in front of the computer because it can save us time and labour．（高分句型三）

I think，in the future，we may depend on our robot servants to do the shopping as well as the housework．New technology will benefit us a lot and we will enjoy the advantages it brings to us．（高分句型四）

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇开放式作文，要求谈论一家三代人随着科学技术的发展购物生活的变化，并畅想未来的购物方式。根据所给内容，文章可分两段来写，第一段首先要点出购物生活随着科技的发展而不断发生变化，而后讲述三代人购物生活的变化；第二段则讲述自己对未来生活的想象。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，本文涉及过去、现在和未来，注意描述过去的事用过去时，描述现在的事用现在时，描述未来用将来时。注意主次要分明，详略要得当，语言应力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇开放式作文，共两段，内容齐全，符合要求，同时使用高级句型。our way of life has been changing all the time．使用现在完成进行时态；Many things that we thought would never happen before are now a reality．运用定语从句；supermarkets opened in our town，so my mother went shopping in a supermarket near my home because it was very convenient．并列句和原因状语从句完美结合；Many young people like me prefer to buy what we like sitting in front of the computer because it can save us time and labour．what引导宾语从句；New technology will benefit us a lot and we will enjoy the advantages it brings to us．并列句和定语从句堪称经典之作；另外，With the development of，For example，Later，depend on， as well as等的运用为文章增色添彩。