Question

【题目】人们对于良好的饮食习惯有着不同的观点，请根据以下内容提示说说你的看法。

内容提示：1.平衡膳食，规律饮食；

2.吃足够的水果和蔬菜，不吃垃圾食品；

3.水和牛奶也是强健体魄的必需品。

注意：词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：垃圾食品 junk food

Different people may have different ideas about good eating habits._______________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Different people may have different ideas about good eating habits.

In my opinion, we first should have a balanced diet. Three regular meals are very important, especially breakfast. They can give us enough energy to carry out our daily activities. What’s more, we should eat enough fruit and vegetables because they are rich in vitamins, which are good for our health. We shouldn’t eat junk food. Finally, we had better drink enough water and milk. They are so necessary for us to build up our bodies.

If we can follow these, we will become much better and healthier.

【解析】本篇书面表达属于提纲作文，内容是谈谈对于良好饮食的看法。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。

【亮点说明】本文用what’s more，finally等词，使得文章层次分明，结构紧凑，语言连贯。同时使用了多种句式和结构。如定语从句we should eat enough fruit and vegetables because they are rich in vitamins, which are good for our health条件状语从句If we can follow these, we will become much better and healthier.等