Question

18．假设你是李华，你国际学校的朋友Paul邀请你下个星期天去他们学校参加文化交流活动并介绍中国传统绘画，但是你的爷爷生病住院，不得不谢绝他的邀请．请根据下面的要点给Paul用英语写一封回信．
     要点：
        1．谢绝Paul的邀请；
        2．说明你的理由；
        3．推荐你的同学Anna参加．
     注意：
       1．词数为100左右；
       2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
       3．信的开头已为你写好（不计入你所写词数）．
Dear Paul，
Thank you very much for your invitation．
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Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是篇书信，要根据三点要求来完成，分别是 1．谢绝Paul的邀请；2．说明你的理由；3．推荐你的同学Anna参加，写作时要注意以下几点：1、写作内容涵盖所有要点，不可遗漏；2、要运用恰当的语气，委婉的表示拒绝，注意时态语态，避免出现语法和拼写错误；3、适当运用高级词汇和句型来为自己的文章增色．
【亮点说明】文章要点齐全，表达思路明确，知识点运用恰当到位，文中使用了非常好的短语和词汇为文章增色不少，比如opportunity，introduce to，inform，look after，take my place，has a broad knowledge of等．还运用了一些从句使得文章结构更加严谨合理，如I strongly recommend my friend Anna，who is the most suitable choice，是定语从句，She began to learn painting at an early age and has a broad knowledge of traditional Chinese painting，which，combined with her active personality and perfect spoken English非限制定于从句，也是一句长句等．并注意了委婉语气的使用I'm sorry to，Sorry again表达了自己诚恳的抱歉之意．

解答 Dear Paul，
  Thank you very much for your invitation．
  I'd love to accept it and take this opportunity to introduce traditional Chinese painting to foreign friends，but I'm sorry to inform you that I can't．My grandpa is seriously ill in hospital and I have to look after him．As for the introduction speech，I strongly recommend my friend Anna，who is the most suitable choice，to take my place next Sunday．（高分句型1）She began to learn painting at an early age and has a broad knowledge of traditional Chinese painting，which，combined with her active personality and perfect spoken English，will help make your activity a success．（高分句型2）
  Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence and all the best wishes to you．（高分句型3）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 提纲类在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需要积累短语和重要句型．