Question

China Daily现就“Health and Wealth, Which Is More Important”在读者中展开讨论，假设你是王磊，你向报社投稿，请依据下列要点写一篇短文，词数110左右，可适当添加细节。首句已给出，不计入总字数。
1．财富比健康重要，富人受人尊重，而穷人受人歧视。
2．健康胜于财富，健康的人才能享受生活。
3．你自己的看法。
Health and Wealth, Which Is More Important
Some people hold that wealth is more important than health．

Answer 1

Some people hold that wealth is more important than health. They think that a wealthy person will be respected in this world, while a poor person will be looked down upon by others. Therefore, a person who tries all means to make money will be considered (to be) a hero no matter whether he is in good or poor health.
However ,the majority of people believe that health is more important than wealth . For example, a healthy scientist can achieve more success in his scientific research .Only if a person enjoys good health ,can he really enjoy his life.
In my opinion, health is more important than wealth .Good health can bring us success as well as real happiness . So ,health is the most important thing that one has to treasure in this world.

试题分析：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。而且我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。这就要求平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】They think that a wealthy person will be respected in this world, while a poor person will be looked down upon by others. 这句话里面有宾语从句，也能正确使用连词while，还有Only if a person enjoys good health ,can he really enjoy his life.这是一个倒装句