Question

假如你是李华，上周在英国参加了你校组织的“中学生文化交流周”活动，并住在Kelly家里。请你给在英国期间认识的新朋友Kelly写封感谢信，内容包括：
交流活动中的收获;
难忘在Kelly家的美好日子;
感谢她送你的英文词典。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。
提示词汇：文化交流周 Cultural Exchange Week
Dear Kelly,
I’ve been back home safely from England.                                                
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you!
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Kelly,
I’ve been back home safely from England. Thank you for the warm help during my stay in England.
Last week, I participated in the Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed myself in your country. We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history. Of course, I also made many new friends.
What’s more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. And I’ll never forget the days we spent together.
Here I especially thank you for the dictionary you offered me as a gift. It’s a great help for me to learn English well. I will treasure and make full use of it.
Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you!
Yours,
Li Hua

试题分析：本文是一篇书信。文章给出了提纲式汉语提示。成文时应注意一下几点：（1）内容要点要齐全；a交流活动中的收获;b难忘在Kelly家的美好日子;c感谢她送你的英文词典。（2）人称：以第一人称为主；（3）时态：一般过去时和一般现在时为主；（4）适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅；（5）恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。
【亮点说明】1.使用高级句型：（1）I enjoyed myself in your country. We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history.（2）It’s a great help for me to learn English well.2.使用了过渡词语：What’s more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. Of course, I also made many new friends. 3.使用了重要短语：I will treasure and make full use of it. I participated in the Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed myself in your country.