Question

一个来自美国的参观团要到你的家乡来参观考察。假设你是他们的导游，请口头向外国朋友们介绍你的家乡。要点如下：
1. 自然资源丰富，盛产苹果。人口有500多万，其中50%是教师、工人、机关工作人员等；
2 自2000年以来工业发展迅猛，拥有一个近十万人口的开发区；
3. 人们重视教育，40%的人受过高等教育。建有50多所中学，200多所小学;
4. 交通便利，有一个火车站、一个国际机场和一个港口，连接国内外主要城市;
5. 可适当增加内容。
注意：1、要求语言流畅，内容连贯；2、字数100—120 ；3、开头已为你写好（不计入词数）。
Welcome to our hometown for an inspection. …
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Welcome to our hometown for an inspection. Our hometown is beautiful and rich in natural resources. It has a population of more than 5 million, about 50 percent of which are workers, teachers, government workers and so on. A great number of good-qualified apples are produced here.
Great changes have taken place since 2000. Industry is developing the fastest and an economic development zone with a population of about 100,000 has already been built. People pay great attention to education and it is developing rapidly. There are more than 50 middle schools and 200 primary schools. About 40 percent of the citizens have received high education. People’s life has greatly improved.
A railway station, a port and an international airport connect all the main cities of home and abroad, playing an important role in the development of economy.

试题分析：提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。
点评：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。