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请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。
Without pain and struggle, life is never complete and successful, just as without amounts of suffering and struggle in cocoon(茧),a butter can never fly.
注意:1.无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语。     2.除诗歌外,文体不限。
3.内容必须结合生活中的一个事例。       4.词数为120左右。

Writing:One possible version
The road of life is never straight and smooth. It is our attitude towards the pain and difficulties that determines how far we can go.
Playing the violin was once my dream, but for lack of practice and playing skills. I did very badly in the beginning, so I was often teased by other students. Gradually, I lost confidence in myself and I wanted to give up the violin. But my teacher told me: “Nothing is easy. Pain and struggle are the vital parts of our life.” Hearing that, I pushed myself harder to practise it. Little by little, I made progress. Eventually I won the first place in a violin competition. For the first time, I tasted the flavor of success after my struggle.
From my experience I’ve learnt the lesson that it is pain and struggle that lead us to success. Whatever difficulties we are faced with, as long as we don’t give up and learn from our mistakes, we are sure to succeed.

试题分析:本文是一篇给出简单汉语提示的议论文类书面表达。本文近似于命题作文。文章给出的汉语提示,只是定出了文章的主要论调。要想写好这类作文,考生必须充分发挥自己的想象力,打开文章的思路,使其有血有肉。文章成文时应注意:1.三段成文法。(1)第一段引出文章的主题;(2)用生活中的实例阐明主题观点;(3)总结全文,得出结论。2.人称:第一人称;3.时态:叙述过去的实例用一般过去时,论述自己的观点用一般现在时。4.适当使用一些连词和插入语,使文章自然、流畅,浑然一体;5.恰当使用高级词汇、短语和句型,以通过文章的档次。
【亮点说明】范文亮点1.使用了强调句型:It is our attitude towards the pain and difficulties that determines how far we can go. Whatever difficulties we are faced with, as long as we don’t give up and learn from our mistakes, we are sure to succeed.2.使用非谓语动词短语:Hearing that, I pushed myself harder to practise it.3.短语:for lack of;give up;little by little;be faced with; be sure to do.
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