Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Peter发邮件说，他正在学汉语，但感觉很吃力，请求你给予帮助。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：

1. 举例说明汉语学习的特点；

2. 提供一些可行的建议。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear peter,

Hope this email finds you well! Last time you said you were learning Chinese but encountered some difficulties. It’s inevitable because English emphasizes the structure, while Chinese focuses on the meaning. Chinese characters are difficult to write and they hare complex tone system. With regard to the matter you mentioned in you letter, my suggestions are as follows:

Firstly, I would recommend you to find a native speaker as a language partner, and meet with him on a regular basis. Besides, watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs can make the learning process much more interesting.

Those are the tips on my mind now. I would always be pleased to offer you help. I do hope you will find these proposals practical.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：

本文是给作者的留学生朋友Peter回封邮件，给他一些关于汉语学习的建议。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。说明汉语学习的特点，给他一些可行的建议。 (2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一部分：写作背景（Peter发邮件说，他正在学汉语，但感觉很吃力）+汉语学习的特点；第二段：可行性的建议（最少两条建议） ；第三段：表示期望（希望建议对Peter有用）。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：while表示前后句对比关系It’s inevitable because English emphasizes the structure, while Chinese focuses on the meaning..；动名词做主语Besides, watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs can make the learning process much more interesting.；助动词do的强调I do hope you will find these proposals practical.。2.使用了过渡词语：Firstly，Besides 等。3.使用了重要短语：with regard to关于，说起；on a regular basis定期地；as follows列举如下。