Question

假如你是李华，最近你校同学就如何对待公共场所吸烟、吐痰等不文明行为展开了讨论。大家的不同意见主要在于是该提醒还是该罚款。下表是讨论的结果和双方理由，请根据表中提供的信息给某英文报社写一封信，客观介绍讨论的情况。

大多数同学认为	其他同学认为
应该提醒； 违章者可能并没有看到警示牌。 警示可以帮助他们意识到所犯的错误，并自觉改正。	应适当罚款。 一般来说，人们会从教训中学会遵守规则； 违章者通常是“贯犯”，提醒他们通常已不再起作用。

词汇： 吐痰spit/ 罚款 fine      文章开头已经写好

Dear Editor,

       I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about how to deal with bad behaviors in public, like smoking and spitting. This is, to remind or to fine.  _____________________________                                        

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Answer 1

Dear Editor,

       I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about how to deal with bad behaviors in public, like smoking and spitting. This is, to remind or to fine.

       The majority of us are for reminders. They think that those who have done something wrong may not have noticed the warning signs. And reminders will surely help them to realize their mistakes and correct them willingly.

       However, the others think these people should be fined because, generally speaking, people will not learn to obey rules unless they are taught a lesson. What’s more, those who go against the rules are usually frequent wrong-doers. Reminders won’t work on them any longer. Meanwhile they suggest these people should be fined properly.

解析:

文笔要非常流畅，要把握所有要点，同时以“我”为中心，详细说明自己对志愿者工作的理解，以此来表达自己的决心。要用词恰当，表现要比较充分，具备一定的说服力。词汇和语句的运用要正确。