Question

【题目】你校文学社向学生征文，请你以“如何实现上大学的梦想”为题写一篇短文。主要内容包括：

1.理想的大学和专业；

2.目前的做法；

3.未来的打算。

注意：1.词数120左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】 I often imagine what university I will enter next year. To be honest ,I do hope I can go to Beijing University to learn economics which I’ve dreamed of since I was a child.

As a matter of fact, I haven’t completely put my heart into all subjects such as maths and physics. I often want to play games and don’t listen to my teachers carefully in class.

As a saying goes “No pains, no gains .” I do know if I really want to realize my dream to the university, I have to work hard at all subjects. From now on, I am determined to make full use of my time, reading wildly, completing all the homework and doing sports to keep healthy. I believe, only by working hard at all subjects can I make my dream come true.

【解析】此文为提纲式作文，要点有： 1.理想的大学和专业；2.目前的做法；3.未来的打算。

首先确定文章的人称时态。时态可以用一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一人称。

然后列关键词：imagine，university，majority，preparation，work hard

再次确定段落及每段的主旨大意。可分三段。第一段写自己理想的大学，第二段写目前的学习状况，第三段写将来的打算。