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3．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
We may have different opinion in organizing class activities．We may have various ways to dealing with such a situation．When I have a better idea，I would choose to stick to them．By doing so，I can not only share good ideas with others and also learn to express myself clear．
   Once we were discussing why t o go for an outing．Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nice place．I manage to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea．We did have a good time on that day．Good opinions are worth sticking because they can benefit us all．

Answer 1

分析 作者通过一次郊游的经历文中告诉我们，有时候同学们在一些问题上会持有不同的观点，这时我们应该倾向于坚持好的观点，这样能使我们从中受益．

解答 We may have different opinion in organizing class activities．We may have various ways to dealing with such a situation．When I have a better idea，I would choose to stick to them．By doing so，I can not only share good ideas with others andalso learn to express myself clear．
   Once we were discussing why to go for an outing．Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nice place．I manage to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea．We did have a good time on that day．Good opinions are worth sticking∧because they can benefit us all．
详解：
1．opinion改为opinions；考查名词，opinion是可数名词，different后面要跟复数形式．
2．dealing改为deal；考查动词，不定式符号to后面跟动词原形，此处不定式短语作后置定语，修饰way．
3．them改为it；考查人称代词，此处指代前面的a better idea，故用单数形式it．
4．and改为but；考查连词，此处构成"not only…but also"结构，意为"不但…而且"．
5．clear改为clearly；考查副词，此处用副词作状语修饰动词express．
6．why改为where；考查副词，分析句意为"我们曾经讨论去哪里郊游"，故用副词where．
7．nice改为nicer；考查形容词的比较级，此处指比公园更好的地方，含有比较的意思，故用比较级形式nicer．
8．manage改为managed；考查动词的时态，本段文字讲述了过去的一次经历，故用一般过去时．
9．去掉on；考查介词，表示时间的名词前面有this，that，last，next等词修饰时，前面不加介词．
10．sticking后面加to；考查介词，stick to是固定短语，意为"坚持"．

点评 短文改错时要注意一下几点：1．快速阅读，整体把握短文大意．2．重视语境以及上下文的关系．3．充分运用基础语言知识找出错误所在．