Question

16．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\） 划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Mary，
I have received your E-mail．Don't worried about me．I'm getting on well with my research work in the lab．But in my surprise，you say you will give up learn English．The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lose interest．I'm afraid that I can't agree with you．I know it is not easy to learn English，and English is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in our future work．Beside，it is becoming more and more important in our daily life．If you study hardly，you will succeed．Do remember that where there is a will，there is a way．I'm looking forward to hearing a good news from you!
                                                     Yours，
                                                     Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要讲述作者劝说Mary不要放弃学习英语，因为英语在日常生活中被广泛使用．且要她记住：有志者事竟成．

解答 Dear Mary，
I have received your E-mail．Don't∧worried about me．I'm getting on well with my research work in the lab．But in my surprise，you say you will give up learn English．The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lose interest．I'm afraid that I can't agree with you．I know it is not easy to learn English，and English is widely used in the world today and it will be∧important tool in our future work．Beside，it is becoming more and more important in our daily life．If you study hardly，you will succeed．Do remember that where there is a will，there is a way．I'm looking forward to hearing a good news from you!
                                                     Yours，
                                                     Li Hua．
详解：
1．加be或worried改为worry 考查词语用法．be worried about=worry about意为"为…担心"，是固定搭配．
2．in改为to 考查固定搭配． to one's surprise意为"使某人惊奇的是"，是固定搭配．
3．learn改为learning 考查动名词．give up意为"放弃"，后接动词时用动名词形式．
4．because改为that 考查固定句型．the reason后接表语从句时，连接用that．
5．lose改为lost 考查动词时态．have+动词过去分词构成现在完成时态．
6．an改为but 考查连词．前后两个单句是转折关系，而非并列关系，用连词but．
7．加an 考查冠词．tool是可数名词，其前加不定冠词表示泛指，因其前单词important的发音是以发元音开头的，用不定冠词an．
8．Beside改为Besides 考查副词．beside是介词，意为"在…旁边"，besides是副词，意为"而且"，此处应是"而且"之意．
9．hardly改为hard 考查副词．hardly意为"几乎不"，hard意为"努力"，此处应是"努力"之意．
10．去掉a 考查冠词．news是不可数名词，其前不加不定冠词．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．