Question

假如你是李华，是一名高一学生，最近听同学说哈九中国际部在招生，你想申请去哈九中国际部学习。请你用英语给哈九中国际部写一封信咨询以下问题：
1．申请需要具备哪些条件；
2．是否需要入学考试及以后的课程安排；
3．费用问题(是否包括食宿和教材)。
注意：可以适当增加细节使行文连贯。词数100左右。
参考词汇：  国际部  International department       
Dear Sir/Madam,
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sincerely yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

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Dear Sir/Madam,      
I am a student who wishes to study abroad. And I learn that the International Department in your school will offer the opportunity for students like me, so I write to inquire about it.
　　First, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your school? I am now a student in High School, but I wonder if there are any further academic requirements. Second, is it necessary for me to take an examination for the enrollment? In addition, I want to learn more about the arrangement with regards to academic schedule. At last, it is not clear how much the tuition fees are. Do the fees include the accommodation or the books?
I’m looking forward to your reply, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to response to me.
sincerely yours,
LiHua

试题分析：信属于应用文，是考生比较熟悉的格式。考生首先要仔细审题，包括以下几个方面：一分清段落。二是注意口气，因为这是咨询信，语气要中肯。三是内容要点要全。注意对于咨询信最后要感谢对方的答复。考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。
点评：作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合作文要求，语气诚恳。文中使用一些极佳的词语和句子为文章增色，使用高级词汇及句型。