Question

书面表达：（25分）
假如你是校报编辑．请根据下面的“姚明小档案”写一篇英语文章．简单介绍姚明的基本情况。
姚明小档案
位置：中锋    国籍：中国   籍贯：上海    生日：9／12／80
高度：2．26M               体重：134．3kg
父母都是篮球运动员。4岁生日时，他得到了第一个篮球。6岁时知道NBA。
9岁开始接受业余训练，17岁入选国家青年队；18岁穿上了中国队服。
2000年奥运会期间，姚明平均每场63．9％的投篮命中率无人能比；在2001年的亚洲篮球锦标赛上。姚明以平 均每场13．4分的成绩帮助中国国家队夺得冠军。
2002年6月被休斯顿火箭队选中，成为一名非常有前途的驰骋于NBA赛场的中国中锋。
注意：1．词数120左右。
生词：亚洲篮球锦标赛：Asian Basketball Tournament
投篮命中率：field goal percentage
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Answer 1

Yao Ming, now 2.26m in height and 134.34 kg in weight, was born in Shanghai, China on September 12, 1980, whose parents were both basketball players. He got the first basketball as his fourth birthday present, and he knew about NBA at the age of 6. Yao Ming began to receive basketball training when he was 9, and he was admitted to National Youth Basketball Team of China at 17. The following year saw him wearing our national team’s uniform.
At the 2000 Olympics, Yao Ming ranked first in field goal percentage (63.9%). And during the 2000 Asian Basketball Tournament, Yao helped China get the title with an average 13.4 points per game.
In June, 2002, Yao Ming was chosen by the Houston Rockets and since then he has been fighting in NBA basketball fields as a promising Chinese centre.

试题分析：这是提纲类短文，根据要点简单介绍姚明的基本情况。文章的要点基本上都给了出来，考生只需要翻译即可，难度不大，在写作的时候也不能逐字逐句的翻译，要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，形成一个整体。选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。如：Yao Ming, now 2.26m in height and 134.34 kg in weight, was born in Shanghai, China on September 12, 1980, whose parents were both basketball players.和Yao Ming began to receive basketball training when he was 9, and he was admitted to National Youth Basketball Team of China at 17.都是很好的句式。写这篇作文的时候特别注意时间的表达。
点评：提纲类作文的关键在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备，不能有遗漏或者省略。但是一定要地道的英语表达法，在写作的时候要变换句式，要写得更为亲切直白。不要过分堆砌。