Question

国内某英文报社开设有专门帮助读者解决困惑的求助信箱（letters to Mr. Helper）。假如你是高三学生李华，请就以下学习生活中的烦恼，给Mr. Helper写一封信，寻求他的帮助。
1．自己学习已经很努力，可父母还是不满意；
2．学校几乎每天都安排考试，心理压力大。
注意：1．为使语句连贯，可以适当增加细节；
2．词数100左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Helper,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Faced with great pressure in life, I’m writing to seek your help.
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Helper,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Faced with great pressure in life, I’m writing to seek your help.
I spare no effort to study, hoping that I’ll become a university student in the near future. I do make some progress in my studies. However, my parents believe that what I’ve done is far from satisfactory. They expect me to do much better.
Almost every day I have to face endless examinations. Our teachers always say that only when we have made adequate preparation will we be able to succeed in the coming College Entrance Examination. Tired and helpless, I don’t think I can put up with such great pressure any more. I’d appreciate it if you can give me some advice.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。同时也属于提纲类作文，要点都已经给出，就学习生活中的烦恼，给Mr. Helper写一封信，寻求他的帮助。包括1．自己学习已经很努力，可父母还是不满意； 2．学校几乎每天都安排考试，心理压力大。审题时注意本文使用的时态，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。如范文里面的my parents believe that what I’ve done is far from satisfactory.和 I’d appreciate it if you can give me some advice.还有要用适当的关联词把文章串联起来：象However,等等。
点评：提纲类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，词汇句型的选用，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。