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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher．Every day, he spends too much time with his work．With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night．Hard work has made him very illness．“He has ruined his health．We are worried about him．” That is which other teachers say．Yesterday afternoon．I paid visit to Mr. Johnson．I was eager to see her, but outside his room I stopped．I had to calm me down．Quietly I step into the room．I saw him lying in bed, looked some of the pictures we had taken together．I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him．

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】with改成on

【2】把so删掉

【3】ilness改成ill

【4】which改成what

【5】在visit前加 a

【6】see后的her改成him

【7】me 改成myself

【8】step改成stepped

【9】looked改成looking

【10】many改成much

【解析】

【1】花费太多的时间在工作上，用spend time on something， 介词with改成on。

【2】with结构表伴随，这里只有一个句子不能用连词，因此把so删掉。

【3】是某人怎样，make somebody +形容词.名词illness改成ill。

【4】be动词后是表语从句，say后面缺少宾语，用what，因此which改成what。

【5】拜访某人 pay a visit to，因此在visit前加 a。

【6】Mr. Johnson是男人，这里代词使用错误，因此 see后的her改成him。

【7】我使自己心情平静，用反身代词，因此me 改成myself。

【8】通篇是一般过去时，因此 step改成stepped。

【9】人看照片，看和躺在床上并列，都是表示主动关系，用现在分词。looked改成looking。

【10】他想念我们和我们想念他一样多，不可数用much 修饰， many改成much。