Question

阅读下面的一则通讯稿，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Recently many advisers have called for reforms of the English language testing system to make it more effective in developing actual language ability.
"Currently, the English testing system in China puts too much pressure on students to get high marks and ignores the development of their comprehensive（综合的）language abilities," they said.
"Some changes in the evaluation procedures of English examinations are necessary for the sound development of the national English education system," others added.
[写作内容]
假设你班最近要进行一次英语主题班会，就上述文章中谈及的话题进行讨论，请你准备一篇发言稿，以下是发言稿的内容（开头与结尾已经写好）：
1. 以约30个词概括和分析上述话题的主要内容；
2. 以约120个词就这一话题发表自己的看法，并包括如下要点：
(1) 你是否赞成通讯稿中人们的观点。
(2) 至少呈现三条理由来支撑自己的观点。
(3) 对于“How to develop comprehensive language ability”，提出你认为最重要的一条途径。
[写作要求]
1.作文中可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接抄用原文中的句子;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear classmates,
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Personally, ____________________________________________________________________________________________
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As to the development of comprehensive language abilities, __________________________
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That’s all. I appreciate your attention.

Answer 1

Dear classmates,
Recently, the topic of whether English should be tested in a reformed way has been heatedly discussed. Many believe the current evaluation procedures hinder students’ comprehensive abilities and therefore argue for a reform.
Personally, I am against this point of view. There are numerous reasons why I think so, but today I would only explore some of them. Firstly, I don’t think our comprehensive abilities are hindered. To my knowledge, many of my classmates are good at all the four skills of English. Moreover, the current testing system is nothing but the fairest way for students to get selected for college study. Admittedly, there is pressure nowadays. But who can guarantee a new testing method will spare us from pressure?
As to the development of comprehensive language abilities, I believe the only solution is we students practice more, either listening and reading or speaking and writing. Only in this way can we learn English in an effective way. That’s all. I appreciate your attention.（152 words）

试题分析：本文属于读写任务写作，动笔前，一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。认真看清题目要求，这篇书面表达给了一段材料：先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容，要求有很高的概括提炼的能力，要抓住文章的主题，再以约120个词写一篇短文，按照要点去表达，不能有遗漏，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮点说明】文章简洁的总结了所给材料，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯，文章使用了高级词汇和短语：hinder，argue for ，To my knowledge, nothing but ，spare sb. from sth，还有复杂的句式：Recently, the topic of whether English should be tested in a reformed way has been heatedly discussed. 这句话用了宾语从句， There are numerous reasons why I think so,这句话用了定语从句， Only in this way can we learn English in an effective way.这句话用了倒装句，还有文章还使用了 Firstly, Moreover,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。