Question

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。

　　注意： 词数不少于60.

　　提示词： 游乐园   amusement park         垃圾箱   bin

Answer 1

　Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.

　　The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view . However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter and put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.

　　We were tired but happy.

解析:

把握要点，本情景作文的内容要点如下：1.讨论；2.爬山；3.检拾别人的垃圾；4.投放垃圾。内容要点可用不同方式表达。其中，写作主题突出，详略得当，尽量用较多的语法结构和词汇，使全文机构紧凑。