Question

日前我校学生会提出倡议，为解决早晚上下学高峰时间校门口的拥堵问题，倡导使用低碳的交通方式。为此，学生会将举办主题为“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：
1. 目前，汽车带来的空气污染和家长开车接送上下学的弊端，如：校门口的拥堵和容易引起交通事故等问题。
2. 骑自行车上学的益处，如环保、有利健康，培养独立能力等。
注意：
(1)对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
(2)词数150左右。演讲稿开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
(3)作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbon life）节能(energy saving)
Good afternoon, everyone ,
I am very glad to give a speech here. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.
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Answer 1

Good afternoon, everyone,
I am very glad to give a speech here. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.
As we all know, with the improvement of people’s living standards, private cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. And every morning our school gate is always crowded with the cars of parents who drive their sons and daughter to school.
How can we solve the problems? In my opinion, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles are energy-saving and environmentally friendly. For another, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health. What’s more, riding to school can also help us less dependent on our parents.
I think the commitment to environmental protection and energy saving is what everyone should take on .Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us!
Thank you!

解析试题分析：本题是材料作文，要求以“Let’s Ride Bicycles”为主题，写一篇演讲稿。作文要包含所有要点，不能逐句翻译，可以适当扩句，使用优美的句子来增加作文的亮点。作文开头部分已经给出，可以接着往下写。
【亮点说明】范文使用了较多的连接词As we all know, In my opinion, For one thing, For another, What’s more, Therefore等，使文章看起来比较连贯，衔接紧密。使用了许多短语，像with the improvement of, such as, is crowded with, take the responsibility to等；定语从句who drive their sons and daughter to school，名词性从句what everyone should take on，非谓语动词bringing great convenience to, riding bicycles的使用，也给文章增色不少。
考点：材料作文