Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的朋友李芳向你询问你校新开设的iPad课程( iPad class)，请你向她写封回信，告诉她课程很受学生欢迎并简单阐述理由，要点如下：

1. 资源丰富

2. 促进交流

3. 利于环保

4. 其他理由

注意：1. 开头和结尾已给出。

2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

3. 词数100词左右。

Dear Li Fang,

I’m very glad to receive your last letter, in which you enquired about our newly opened iPad classes.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Li Fang,

I’m very glad to receive your last letter, in which you enquired about our newly opened iPad classes. The class is very popular among the students, and the reasons are as follows.

To begin with, everyone learns in a respective way. Students can refer to theirs iPads for materials that suit their level and learning style to meet their different needs. Moreover, when connected to the Internet, students can interact with teachers and peers about how they learn more conveniently, which will contribute favorably to their learning efficiency. Furthermore, we also consider it environment-friendly to open iPad classes, for paper is no longer a necessity. More importantly, students’ passion for study will be enormously sparked with this brand-new way of learning.

Looking forward to your attending our iPad class.

Yours sincerely.

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。根据题干可知：你的朋友李芳向你询问你校新开设的iPad课程(iPad class)，要求写封回信，告诉她课程很受学生欢迎并简单阐述理由，理由要点如下：资源丰富；促进交流；利于环保；还有其他理由。据此文章可分三段来写，第一段首先表达谢意，第二段对课程进行介绍并指明课程受欢迎的原因，第三段邀请朋友参与课程。成文时要注意：1. 通篇以一般现在时态为主；2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。3. 注意语气。既然是给朋友的回信，言辞可以活泼而亲近。

【范文亮点】

1. 文章层次分明，从三个方面讲了课程受欢迎的原因，感染力强且富有号召力。

2. 文章运用了"furthermore, moreover"等高分词语，使得文章层次分明；此外，还运用了＂Moreover, when connected to the Internet, students can interact with teachers and peers about what they learn more conveniently, which will contribute favorably to their learning efficiency.＂等非限制性定语从句。