Question

书面表达（30分）
据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌（lung cancer）后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会（ACS）决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。
假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：
l  自我介绍
l  得知的情况
l  表示鼓励
l  打算为她做什么
l  祝她早日康复
注意：
1. 信的格式已为你写好
2. 信中不得出现你的真实情况。
3. 词数100左右。
4. 请在答题卡上作答。
Dear Amy,
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Amy,
I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung cancer.
At present, ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it.
I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you. It will give more courage to live on.
May you recover soon.
Yours,
Li Hua

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。要求用英文给Amy写一封慰问信。要点都已经给出，信件要点包括：自我介绍，得知的情况，表示鼓励，打算为她做什么，祝她早日康复，审题时注意时态的选择，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。象范文的I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is.使用了no matter how引导的让步状语从句，还有I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you.用了非限制性定语从句。还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
点评：书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。