Question

假设你是新华中学的高三毕业生李华，刚刚参加完高考。最近听说美籍华人李响出资帮助贫困大学生。请你根据以下要点写一封资助申请信。
1．个人情况介绍；
2．申请资助原因(家庭困难情况)；
3．资助款的使用及今后打算。
注意：1．词数：120—150(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr．Li，[]
I’m had to hear that you will help those who are lackingin money in going to college．I'm writing to apply for it.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Li，
I'm glad to hear that you will help those who lack money in going to college. I'm writing to apply for it.
My name is Li Hua，a Senior Three student of Xinhua Middle School. I have much financial difficulty in continuing my college education，but I'm eager to go on with my further study.
In my family my father is the only breadwinner while my mother was laid off two years ago. My grandmother has been suffering from a lung illness for more than five years. My younger brother is now studying in a junior school. I took part time jobs during the summer vacation，but what I have earned is far from enough for me to pay the required tuition fees. In order to continue my study，I have to apply for your help.
If my request is accepted，I will make good use of the money and put my heart into study and make myself a useful man to the society. I hope that you will consider my application.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些不错的短语have difficulty in doing 做某事有困难；be eager to do 迫切想做某事；suffer from遭受；make use of 充分利用；put one’s heart into全心身投入于；In my family my father is the only breadwinner while my mother was laid off two years ago.这个句子中while然而表对比；what I have earned is far from enough for me to pay the required tuition fees.这个句子中what引导主语从句。