Question

6．假设你是李华，你的英国好友John来信说要来中国度假，期间将借住在你家一周．希望你能安排他的活动．请你给他写封回信．信的内容包括：
1．欢迎他的到来；
2．告知你的假期安排．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear John，
I'm very glad that you'll come to China for a holiday and stay at my home for a week．Here，I want to share my holiday schedules with you．
On one hand，we'll get up at six every morning and do morning exercise to build up our body．On the other hand，it's necessary to finish our homework as soon as possible．Then we'll have enough time to review what we have learned，which can help us prepare for the new lessons．
Besides exercise and learning，we can also go out to do some useful activities，such as visiting cultural museums，climbing the Great Wall and doing different volunteer work．I hope you'll enjoy my arrangements．
Looking forward to your arrival．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是李华写给英国好友John的信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般将来时．内容包括：一欢迎他的到来并且表明书信目的；二告知他假期的安排；三期盼他的到来．
高分句型：
1．On the other hand，it's necessary to finish our homework as soon as possible．句子里On the other hand和上句的 On one hand呼应，表示"一方面，另一方面"；it做形式主语，代指to finish our homework．
另一方面，尽快完成我们的作业是必须的．
2．Then we'll have enough time to review what we have learned，which can help us prepare for the new lessons．句子里what we have learned是宾语从句，表示"我们已经学过的东西"；which引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句； prepare for 表示"为某事做准备"．
然后，我们会有足够的时间来复习我们已经学过的东西，这麽做会帮助我们为新课做好准备．

解答 Dear John，
    I'm very glad that you'll come to China for a holiday and stay at my home for a week．Here，I want to share my holiday schedules with you．（欢迎他的到来并且表明书信目的）
    On one hand，we'll get up at six every morning and do morning exercise to build up our body．On the other hand，it's necessary to finish our homework as soon as possible．【高分句型一】Then we'll have enough time to review what we have learned，which can help us prepare for the new lessons．【高分句型二】Besides exercise and learning，we can also go out to do some useful activities，such as visiting cultural museums，climbing the Great Wall and doing different volunteer work．I hope you'll enjoy my arrangements．（告知他假期的安排）
     Looking forward to your arrival．（期盼他的到来）
                                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                                                                               Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
提纲类书面表达主要特点是：要点明确，范围具体，贴近生活，易于动笔．此类试题中有较多的文字说明，实际上规定了考生表述的思路，对考生的写作范围作了较为明确的限定，试题中规定的要点一个也不能回避．考生极易受中文提纲的制约，将书面表达变成了翻译，造成语法结构和语汇上的单调，因此平时要多练习，活用语言，使文章流畅．