Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before. I have been thought about the question raised in your letter. On my opinion, you should come back after you finish your studies at abroad. For one thing, that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our country. It will be quite easily for you to find a good job. In fact, I know that a few big company in our city hope to hire people like you. For another, I think it will be more convenient for you look after your parents because they are getting older and older. And this is only my point of view. It is up to me to make a right choice.

Answer 1

【答案】1. before---ago

2. thought---thinking

3. On---In

4. at abroad 去掉at

5. that---what

6. easily---easy

7. company---companies

8. look前加to

9. And ---But

10. me---you

【解析】考查介词。.ago表示“从现在起的若干时间以前”，意思是“距今以前”，需和过去时或过去进行时连用。before泛指“从过去起的若干时间以前”，意思是“距过去某时以前”“与其（毋宁）”，常和完成时连用。“I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks——.”我很高兴收到你两周前寄给我的信，可知应该是距今两周之前，故将 before改成ago 。

考查现在完成进行时。has/havebeendone是现在完成时的被动语态，而 I have been thought about the question raised in your letter.我一直在想你信中提出的问题。此句中并无被动的意思，而是现在完成进行时。故将 thought改为thinking 。

考查固定搭配。In my opinion,意为在我看来。故将On改成In 。

考查介词。abroad表示“在国外”“到国外”等，是副词，不是名词，因此不能与 in, to, at 等介词连用。故 at abroad 去掉at 。

考查主语从句。That引导主语从句时，在句中无具体含义，只起连接作用，不充当句子成分。这样的话这个从句就不是完整的句子，缺少studying的宾语，故将 that改为what 。

考查副词应修饰动词。quite为副词，意为非常地，相当地，在 It will be quite easily for you to find a good job中，quite修饰easily，但easily是副词，不是动词，所以应该用动词形式，故将easily改为easy

考查可数名词的复数。 a few用来修饰可数名词，故将 company改为companies

考查分词。to +look表目的。故look前加to。

考查连词。this is only my point of view.与前文构成转折的关系，意为但这只是我的观点。故将And 改为But。

考查人称。由文章意思可知应该是“它是由你来做出选择的，”而不是由我，故将me改为you。