作文my holiday答案解析

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寒假就要到了，假期你有什么打算？去旅游，还是呆在家？帮妈妈做家务，还是与同学玩耍？请以“My Plan for the Winter Holiday”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文。

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“五一”小长假，你们全家去锡惠公园游玩。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文参加以“How to Behave Politely”为主题的征文比赛，并适当加以评论。要点提示：亲身经历1. 我们玩得正开心，不和谐的一幕发生了；一位女士将垃圾扔在地上；

2. 我试图阻止，但她拒绝听我的；相反还嘲笑我；

3. 我将垃圾捡起来并扔进垃圾桶；我的观点4. 我们应该关注自己的礼仪(manners)；

5. 当在不同场合时，如：图书馆、过马路、乘车时，应该……注意：1. 征文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2. 第5点须用2～3句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥；

3. 词数80个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

How to Behave Politely

During this May Day Holiday, all my family visited Xihui Park.

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寒假将至，请根据以下提示用英语向同学们介绍你自己的寒假计划(My plan for the winter holiday) 。

要求：1. 词数80左右；短文中不得出现真实的人名、班级名；

2. 短文应包括表格内所有内容要点，不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。

My plan for the winter holiday

Winter holiday is coming, now I want to say something about my plan for the winter holiday.

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假期总是留给我们最难忘的记忆，新学期开学，老师希望同学们讲自己假期中难忘的经历和大家分享，请以“My Holiday”为题，写一篇不少于80字的作文。

题目：My holiday

提示：写一篇描述你假期活动的小短文。

要求：1.以第一人称进行描写，可参考使用所给单词，也可作适当发挥；

      2.条理清晰，意思明确，句子通顺，标点正确，书写工整、规范；

      3.不少于60个单词。

参考单词；Friday , play football , go to the park , visit grandparents

开放性作文

根据要求，写一篇短文。将短文写在答题卡开放性作文空白处。

快乐轻松的暑假就要来临，尤其是对于即将毕业的初三学生来说，假期更显漫长，大部分学生假期里过多地看电视、玩电脑、睡觉等，让假期过得散漫之极，初中的最后一个暑假，也是高中前的一个休整时期，你打算怎么过得充实又有意义？请以“My summer holiday”为题，根据以下提示介绍下自己的暑假计划。

要求：1．内容应该包括以上提示，可适当发挥。

2．条理清楚，语句通顺, 语法正确，书写规范。

3．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。

4．80词左右,开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

My Summer Vacation

The summer vacation is coming. What are you going to do during the vacation? I am going to …

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I am sure I am going to have an interesting and meaningful summer vacation.

英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The winter holiday is coming, which makes me very exciting. I have been looking forward to relax myself and I’d like to go fishing, climb high mountain and ride my bicycle. I think I can play football or play the chess with my father as well. How a wonderful time I will have during the winter holiday! But my father has differently opinions. He doesn’t want me to go out. He’s afraid that I’ll be knocked down a truck, fall into rivers, fall off a tree or fight with other. What’s worse, he’s afraid I will get lost. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. I need freedom but I will try to persuade my father.

根据题目要求及要点，运用作文模板，在横线上 填上适当的内容。

Have you ever been to Guilin? I have been there. I've been to is Guilin.

Last summer holiday,I had Gui lin with my family. We went there by train. We stayed there for a week. I think Yangshuo is the most beautiful one of all the in Guilin. The landscape around Yangshuo is amazing. The mountains stand and reach for the sky. We took a ride on the boat on the Li River. We had some there and

，too. I hope I can go there again some day.

英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下便条为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at
relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play
the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday!
However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be
knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose
my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, so I will try to
persuade them.

英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。

My grandmother is a village woman. She is already in her seventy. Although she received little school education, but she is aware that knowledge is of great important to young people. When my father was young, my grandmother took good care him so that my father could cost more time on his studies. Now, she often encouraged me to study hard. This summer she was bad ill in bed. When I visited her during the summer holiday, I found her sitting in bed, made new shoes for me! I was so deeply moving that tears came to my eyes. So is my grandmother, a kind and hardworking woman. I’ll respect and love her forever.

英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下便条为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。

The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at

relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play

the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday!

However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be

knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose

my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, so I will try to

persuade them.

英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
My grandmother is a village woman. She is already in her seventy. Although she received little school education, but she is aware that knowledge is of great important to young people. When my father was young, my grandmother took good care him so that my father could cost more time on his studies. Now, she often encouraged me to study hard. This summer she was bad ill in bed. When I visited her during the summer holiday, I found her sitting in bed, made new shoes for me! I was so deeply moving that tears came to my eyes. So is my grandmother, a kind and hardworking woman. I’ll respect and love her forever.

英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
My grandmother is a village woman. She is already in her seventy. Although she received little school education, but she is aware that knowledge is of great important to young people. When my father was young, my grandmother took good care him so that my father could cost more time on his studies. Now, she often encouraged me to study hard. This summer she was bad ill in bed. When I visited her during the summer holiday, I found her sitting in bed, made new shoes for me! I was so deeply moving that tears came to my eyes. My grandmother is so a kind and hardworking woman. I’ll respect and love her forever.