Question

19．安全对每个人都很重要．请根据以下信息内容提示，写一篇关于安全的英语小短文．

锻炼	小心运动；避免受伤
课间	上下楼梯，不要拥挤（crowd together）；…（至少一点）
交通	…（至少两点）
食品	健康饮食，远离垃圾食物（junk food）
其它	…（至少两点）

要求：
1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整；
2．短文可以适当发挥，但要包含以上要点；
3．文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名；词数100左右 （开头和结尾已给出不计入词数）．
Safety has become the focus for us all．How to keep safe is very important to us students．                  ．
In a word，it's important for everyone to remember these safety tips．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
First，we should be①careful enough not to get hurt②while we are playing sports．首先，我们应该在做运动的时候足够仔细不要受伤．
①adj+enough to do sth 足够…做某事
②while引导的时间状语从句，"在…时候"
【高分句型二】
Fourth，we should be careful not to eat unhealthy food and①keep away from junk food，②which③is harmful to our health第四，我们应该注意不要吃不健康食品，远离垃圾食品，它们对我们的健康有害．
①keep away from远离…，后可加名词．
②which作为关系词的非限制性定语从句，修饰前面的整个句子．
③be harmful to …对…有害．

解答 Safety has become the focus for us all．How to keep safe is very important to us students．First，we should be careful enough not to get hurt while we are playing sports．【高分句型一】（锻炼）Second，there are too many students between classes．We mustn't crowd togetehr especially when we walk upstairs or downstairs．And it's important for us not to fight with each other．（课间）Third，we must obey traffic rules on the way home or to school．When the light is red，we must never cross the road．It's very dangerous．（交通）Fourth，we should be careful not to eat unhealthy food and keep away from junk food，which is harmful to our health．【高分句型二】（食品）
Besides，we can't get into the water when we're alone or if there's a"NO SWIMMING"sign．What's more，we should be careful with fire at any time．（防火防水）
In a word，it's important for everyone to remember these safety tips．

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