Question

【题目】 短文改错（每小题1分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My little cousin is greatly interested on science. And he does some dangerous experiments sometime. Although his parents want to encourage him to be great scientist, at times they worry about his safety. Last week, when my cousin was doing an experiment, he hurts his thumb. My aunt felt sadly and wanted him to stop from doing that experiment. However, my cousin didn’t want to give up. She said, ＂Many scientists got hurt when they were doing experiments, so they didn’t give up.＂ My aunt had to let him finish the experiments and he finally succeeded in finish it.

Answer 1

【答案】

My little cousin is greatly interested science. And he does some dangerous experiments . Although his parents want to encourage him to be great scientist, at times they worry about his safety. Last week, when my cousin was doing an experiment, he his thumb. My aunt felt and wanted him to stop doing that experiment. However, my cousin didn’t want to give up. said, ＂Many scientists got hurt when they were doing experiments, they didn’t give up.＂ My aunt had to let him finish the and he finally succeeded in it.

【解析】

第一处：on→in be interested in sth.为固定用法，表示＂对……感兴趣＂。

第二处：sometime→sometimes 此处表示＂有时，不时，间或＂，应用sometimes；sometime作状语时，表示＂在(将来或过去的)某个时候＂。

第三处：在great前加a 此处泛指成为＂一名杰出的科学家＂，scientist为可数名词，故应用不定冠词限定。

第四处：hurts→hurt 根据Last week可知，本句描述的是过去发生的事件，故谓语动词应用一般过去时。

第五处：sadly→sad feel是系动词，后跟形容词作表语，而sadly为副词，应用形容词sad。

第六处：删掉stop后的from stop doing sth表示＂停止做某事＂，为固定搭配。

第七处：She→He 该处的人称代词指的是my cousin，前文都用he来指代，故此处要与前文保持一致。

第八处：so→but 此处表示：许多科学家在做实验的时候都受伤了，但他们并未放弃。前后为转折关系，故用but。

第九处：experiments→experiment 此处指＂让他完成那个实验＂，为单数。

第十处：finish→finishing 介词的宾语应为名词、代词或动名词因此此处应用动名词作介词in的宾语。