Question

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father was a first - class chef．I eventually decided to give up my previously job as a salesman and train as a chef．Three years later，I became head chef in restaurant．Soon after which，I realized my career was becoming successful and I found I had to make a choice．I could neither work for a big restaurant or open one of my own．And my father became ill and I got his job. On my first day at work I was greeting by an unexpected cold reception．What made it bad was that I was having a bad cold．With my hands shook, I entered the kitchen．I hold my breath, stood up and said “You all know my Father．Whether you loved him or hated him, I don’t care about．It’s the past.  Now, Let’s get to work...”

Answer 1

【小题1】previously → previous
【小题2】加上a
【小题3】which → that
【小题4】neither → either
【小题5】And → But
【小题6】greeting → greeted
【小题7】bad → worse
【小题8】shook → shaking
【小题9】hold → held
【小题10】去掉about

解析试题分析：
【小题1】I eventually decided to give up my previously job as a salesman and train as a chef．改为previous。题意：我最后决定放弃先前的工作。previous，形容词修饰job。
【小题2】Three years later，I became head chef in ∧ restaurant. 加上a. 题意：三年后在一家饭店成为首席厨师。restaurant在这里是泛指。
【小题3】Soon after which, 改为that。此后不久。that为指示代词，指代“成为首席厨师”这一事实。
【小题4】I could neither work for a big restaurant or open one of my own. 改为either。题意：（因为职业上很成功）我可以到一家大饭店服务，也可以开一家自己的饭店。either … or …：要么……要么……
【小题5】And my father became ill and I got his job. 改为But.。父亲的突然生病打乱了我原先的计划，我只得接替他的工作。这是一个转折。
【小题6】On my first day at work I was greeting by an unexpected cold reception．改为greeted。上班第一天受到冷遇。be greeted with：遭遇。
【小题7】What made it bad was that I was having a bad cold．改为worse。（不但遭到冷遇）更糟糕的是感冒了。make sth. worse：使情况更糟。
【小题8】With my hands shook, 改为shaking。hands是shake的执行者，应使用现在分词。
【小题9】I hold my breath. 改为held。前面的entered，后面的stood都是过去时态，要求hold也用过去式。
【小题10】I don’t care about. 去掉about。care about应后接宾语。本句中没有宾语，about多余。
考点：短文改错。