Question

目前许多学校对学生采取封闭式管理，学生对此看法不一。请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。

有的同学认为	有的同学认为
学校限制学生的自由 学生和社会接触少 学生的兴趣和爱好不能得到充分的发展，因此……	学校是学习知识的地方 学生应该安心在学校学习 学生缺乏自觉性，离开了老师，可能会……
你的看法……

注意：1．词数100左右；
2.短文开头已给出，不计人总词数。
Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long.                              
                                                                               
                                                                        

Answer 1

Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long. Students have diffenent opinions about it.
Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get in touch with society. They are not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies. Therefore, they have less interest in their studies.
Some others think school is the best place to get knowledge so they should put their heart into their lessons. Some students lack the ability to control themselves. Once out of school, they may lose control of themselves and do something that will influence their studies.
Personally, it is necessary to keep students at school. But at the same time schools should organize various activities so that students can enjoy their school life. I don’t agree to keep students at school all day. Schools should offer students more free time to develop their personal interests.

试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，主题是对学校对采取封闭式管理学生的不同观点，题目给出了大部分要点，也要考生给出自己的观点。文章结构清晰，先是一些同学反对的观点，然后赞同的观点，最后是自己的观点，要求考生用地道的英语表达自己的观点，要求观点明确，驾驭语言的能力强，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，使文章成为一个整体。
点评：本文属于正反方观点作文，但是要点给出的比较全，只需要考生表达清楚，还有自己的观点。在写作的时候要适合合适的连接词来连接各要点，使他们成为整体。要选择高级的词汇和句型，让文章有变化，有层次。