Question

书面表达（满分25分）
假定你校正在开展“根除陋习、创建文明校园”活动。请你以此为主题用英语写一篇发言稿，向全校学生倡议：
根除：乱扔垃圾、浪费食物、吸烟……
提倡：讲礼貌、互助……
注意：
词数100左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
As is known to all, our school has launched a campaign against had habits in order to build a civilized campus.____________________________________________________________________
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That’s all. Thank you.
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear friends,
As is known to all, our school has launched a campaign against bad habits in order to establish a civilized campus. But it has come to my notice that lots of bad behavior still exists in our school. This does great harm to the image of our school.
Therefore, I strongly urge that we students stop throwing rubbish everywhere and spitting in public. Besides, every one must discipline himself not to make dirty remarks or waste food. Such bad manners as smoking and fighting should also be removed from our campus. At the same time, we should start with ourselves to perform good manners all the time and everywhere. We also promote the spirit of helping each other and healthy competition. Once again I’m here earnestly calling on everyone to take action and contribute to making our school a nicer place.
That’s all. Thank you.

试题分析：这是一篇发言稿，所以在语言的使用上要大众化，话题是关于“根除陋习、创建文明校园”活动，另外注意题目的要求1.要求…2. 提倡…，所以要按照这样一个顺序去写，注意不要有遗漏。本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要充实文章内容，需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。范文中的But it has come to my notice that lots of bad behavior still exists in our school.用的是it做形式主语。此外还要用适当的关联词把句子串联起来，使文章更加连贯。
点评：本文属于发言稿，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。并且注意字数限制